User talk:Ebillin2/sandbox

Comments on assignment 1.
Hi Edward. I see you figured out how to cite and wrote a general summary of the NAP book. I was thinking your writing would be about a more specific part of the book but my instructions may have not been very clear. Three comments: 1) You have three citations from the same source. Instead, re-use an existing citation in order to not duplicate the citation.  Try to go back in your sandbox and delete a citation, and re-insert it but select another existing citation (re-use citation option).  2) You have a direct quote which is not necessary...you have the ability to turn this into a review of the existing information presented in the book. 3) use headings...in the visual editor, select the text that is to be a heading, then select the Paragraph menu and select the heading level. I added a top-level heading to your section.  Answer.to.the.rock (talk) 15:10, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments as assignment 2.

 * You didn't state the article you were reviewing was Proxy (climate).
 * I agree with most of your comments. This article needs help.  It needs to be harmonized with Paleoclimatology.
 * I found a major issue with the introduction and edited the article this morning. It erroneously said ice cores and sediments were proxies. This is wrong.  They are archives.  The proxy is the thing that is measured in the archive. Answer.to.the.rock (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2020 (UTC)