User talk:Ebinrt

Your submission at Articles for creation: Salam Neighbor (April 28)
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Ringbang (talk) 02:40, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Salam Neighbor has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Salam Neighbor. Thanks! Ringbang (talk) 03:53, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Salam Neighbor (April 29)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ringbang was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Ringbang (talk) 09:37, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Salam Neighbor (May 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RadioFan was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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RadioFan (talk) 14:16, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Reply to your Articles for Creation Help Desk question
Hello, Ebinrt! I'm St170e. I have replied to your question about a submission at the WikiProject Articles for Creation Help Desk st170etalk 02:12, 2 May 2016 (UTC) st170etalk 02:12, 2 May 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Salam Neighbor has been accepted
 Salam Neighbor, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! st170etalk 05:44, 2 May 2016 (UTC)
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Improving your recent article
Hello! Well done on your draft. It was great work, but don't give up on the article yet! It is now open to all Wikipedia users. I've tagged the Wikipedia page with three specific issues that need to be addressed so others can help. Please reorganise your article (the main section on the documentary) and divide this into further subsections. Anything about the release of the film should be grouped under one heading etc, so that the reader can navigate the article better. Hope this helps! st170etalk 05:50, 2 May 2016 (UTC) Also, just want to add, that the images are marked as your 'own work', which is completely false. This is why there is a copyright issue over the images, which may be removed from Wikipedia. st170etalk 05:57, 2 May 2016 (UTC)

Copyright Violations
Just to let you know in case you haven't seen your talk page on the WikiCommons, your images on the page Salam Neighbor have been removed as they were violations of copyright. st170e talk 06:07, 15 May 2016 (UTC)

Hi. It seems the photo issue has been fixed by someone because some pictures are back on, but not all of them. I have worked on adding additional sections to comply with the layout guidelines and make the article more accessible, as requested. I also added the section called Reception, as was requested, but now there is a note saying it is too much like an advertisement for basically the same information. I also tried to deal with the orphan issue through two different citations, one in the article Living on One Dollar, which was made by the same filmmakers, as well as a reference in the article Documentaries. Have I resolved all the problems? Ebinrt (talk) 17:43, 7 July 2016 (UTC)