User talk:Eboddewyn

I just resubmitted the draft for the page on Action Teaching and I wanted to explain why I feel as though I have made the changes suggested by reviewers. The resubmission addresses concerns from the previous reviewer that "action teaching" is simply a term used in articles by Scott Plous and his website at ActionTeaching.org. As documented below, Professor Plous is the person who coined the term, but Division 9 of the American Psychological Association (APA) has now established its own Action Teaching Award and Action Teaching Grants Program, the Journal of Social and Political Psychology has a section devoted to "Action Teaching Reports," the APA's monthly magazine has published multiple articles on action teaching, and educators at a wide variety of schools have developed award-winning examples of action teaching. I hope this additional documentation and revision of the Wikipedia submission successfully addresses the concerns that were raised earlier. Action teaching is a term coined more than 20 years ago and is broadly used among educators who incorporate peace, social justice, and sustainable living directly into their teaching and curricula. A Wikipedia entry on action teaching will help inform the public and teachers who want to learn more about this pedagogical approach.

˜˜˜˜Eboddewyn

I am new to Wikipedia and was wondering when I can expect a response to my updated draft posting?

Thank you!

Eboddewyn (talk) 01:03, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Eboddewyn

Your submission at Articles for creation
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1292simon (talk) 02:54, 22 May 2020 (UTC)