User talk:Eccstudent18/sandbox

SO100 - instructor comments
Hi! This is your instructor Sarah. Good start on this. You have 100 words, but I'm concerned that you might be inserting some of your own opinion/views (editorializing) into the article when you say the job "can end in tragedy". Make sure to back up claims with citations -- whatever they are. If you say "more expensive" make sure you say based on what data. It's a good start so be careful with citing sources and you'll be fine. Sarahczarita (talk) 20:10, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

Good start to your article. I like how you differentiated between the type of nurse you are writing about and an RN. It clarifies the different types of schooling, focus of the nurse, and pay. These are all important factors when learning about different types of nurses. You have many good sources and I think you can use them well in your article. However, make sure you stay away from being one sided when discussing the job and remain neutral. Great start and good luck! Cmc58 (talk) 16:59, 5 April 2017 (UTC)