User talk:Echoloc8n/sandbox

Final Comments
This is definitely an improvement, Echoloc8n. I have reinstated your edits that seemingly accidentally got deleted in your shared sandbox with the heading "Echoloc8n Edits." In order for your edits to be seriously considered for addition by the Wikiedu folks, paste the section from the article that you intend to edit, publish that, and then add your edits where you want them and publish again. With each edit, leave a comment about what you are doing. This way it is very easy to check the history and tell exactly how you envision your edits to be included in the article. Currently it is difficult to tell where it goes. Be sure not to delete anyone else's work in your shared sandbox. You will also need to offer proper citation throughout this. Each claim should be supported.

While you are not required to make these changes, doing so will increase the chances that your work makes it onto the page itself. --Jbdolphin (talk) 01:55, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments
This is odd, because I know I left notes for you last week and now I do not see them. I can only guess that I accidentally hit preview, but not publish--sigh. So let me try again. It looks like you have some good things to add, but which bits come from what are not fully clear. Be sure that the reference for each is very clear. Also, I am not so sure I understand #12. How does social conformity relate to morality and citizenship in this case? And who is being the positive force? It's a bit fuzzy. Work for the greatest clarity possible. --Jbdolphin (talk) 07:00, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

You have a really good base line in the way of notes. It appears that you have some good sources from which you have derived some good notes that will help you in your draft for character education. While you don't have anything resembling a draft to submit, I think you will be able to submit a great draft for submission soon providing you are able to use the information given usefully. ApprehensiveAlpaca (talk) 07:49, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

These are great ideas and are broken up in a good and digestible way. From what you have here I can see how your future edit could shape up and what it could contain. On further inspection this appears similar to an annotated bibliography, I look forward to see where it goes! Dqdolphin (talk) 17:17, 21 April 2021 (UTC)