User talk:Echy1566

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Not a reason for deletion, but your title was wrong, should just be Draft:Hawken Horse. Even if a disambiguation were necessary, should be (band), without caps.

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 * you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the organisation claims or interviewing its management. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls
 * Most of your text was unreferenced, apart from joining the podcast. There were some other refs dumped at the bottom, but we don't know what facts they are supposed to be supporting
 * In any case, they were unsuitable, including interviews with the band, social media and links to their music rather than independent third-party sources
 * You claim they are notable, but I see no sales figures, awards, chart placings or anything else that suggests that they meet the notability criteria linked above


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 * Such as quickly gained a following for their unique sound and their compelling live shows... Both albums have been praised by critics and fans alike for their songwriting, musicianship, and production... Hawken Horse is a band that is truly unique... Their music is both entertaining and educational, and it is sure to appeal to a wide range of listeners... This helped grow more awareness, and increased the band's popularity on streaming services.  Fact-free promo.


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If you are writing about yourself, or someone you know as a friend, colleague, client, employer or relative, you have a conflict of interest, and you must disclose the nature of that COI. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 05:25, 11 October 2023 (UTC)