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•	You have a good layout all the work that you'll be covering you have written in bullet points where all you need to do is research. On your bullet points I see you found mistakes within the article that you can change to improving it I think this will be an improvement for the articles structure. •	The books influenced by Blue highway all seem to be about travel, I wonder how these could tie into some of our subjects we discussed in our class. Such as contact-zones or how culture has been influenced into the travel writer. Did the author learn anything along the way of his journey (For example, when we read Che Guevara a lot of his travel helped shape a revolutionary mindset) I researched and found that William had lost his job and that influenced him to go on the travel along the United States and that he was searching for a deeper purpose of himself. Was he able to find that purpose he was searching for within himself after the traveling? Where there any differences he found in exploring Mexico and the United States. •	On one of your headlines I saw Eco-centrism and Nature: How does this specific topic fall into your project work and travel writing? It would be interesting to know how nature could have influenced any of the Blue Highway traveling. •	The idea of Moons being perceived as a Native-American Author and a non-native author can tie to how his work persuades the reader, I'd like to know how and why it is relevant to travel writing. What causes Native American readers to think Moons is a Native-American Author and Non-native authors think he’s a Non-Native? •	Under the Person Life section, you could possibly write about Moons experience as he started and how he has had any influence as to why start traveling. Adding context to his work could also help a reader grasp the information. Blue Highways revisited: What comparisons where there from the original travels and revisited travel. Any changes that occurred could possibly be from influence of the original travel because there was a set of expectation of the travel routes set. •	I think the article does an excellent job persuading a reader how Moons can be contributed to travel writing though I believe there needs to be some work done on the Cultural Impact of Blue Highways section there was only a small summary of the books.