User talk:Ecpleshka/sandbox

Edited by kadunnett
A good plan for your article.

It is clear you have done significant research on your topic and have found appropriate sources. You will be able to greatly improve this article. In reading your plan on psychological disorders, how is this going to relate back to the topic of epigenetics? Be careful of plural nouns. Unsure of what you mean by BDNF- be sure to at some point describe this as most readers will not be familiar. Under you subtitle "Personality Disorders" make sure to explain the concept of the dimensional model. Also in "Borderline Personality Disorder" be sure to explain and make clear what BPD, BIS and BAS are in relation to the topic. I like how you are able to apply this topic to the Big Five, such as neuroticism when you are discussing personality traits.