User talk:Ecspaulding/sandbox

Hey I added two facts to the article, I think they fit where I put them, but someone can change them in they fit somewhere else better.

Nice article! Great information! Here is a suggested edit to the following sentence. I have posted the original first: Original: According to the Survey of Doctoral Recipents' national date show, married women with young children received 33% less tenure jobs. Even if women receive the tenure job, they still get paid less than males with the same job. (O'Donnell, 2017) Suggested: According to the Survey of Doctoral Recipients', national data showed married women with young children received 33% fewer tenure jobs. Even if women received the tenure job, they still got paid less than their male counterparts. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 147.226.88.252 (talk) 16:20, 20 March 2018 (UTC)