User talk:Ed.birch

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Laser engraving
I have some minor printing experience from many years ago, and so am interested in the current laser imaging techniques that you have expanded at laser engraving. However, I mainly watch that page to revert spammers who add links to promote their products, so it was a pleasure to see that you improved the article. I did a little tweaking, although more is needed, for example "In past 5 years" (an existing expression that you did not introduce) needs to be replaced with some wording that will make sense in ten years time. In addition, "can be striking and mesmerizing" (another existing expression) is totally non-encyclopedic and should be removed. Also, articles normally should not be written like a monthly magazine which focuses on the latest trends and pricing. I should put comments like these in the talk page of the article, but I thought I'd mention it here due to your recent contribution. If you have any questions, you can ask on my talk page or on the talk page of the article. Johnuniq (talk) 22:17, 26 October 2009 (UTC)