User talk:Ed zigo

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What would you wish to add to the article? If it is promotional, that is exactly why the article is being nominated for deletion.

SwisterTwister  talk  00:47, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

&#160; Hello, From what I have read, all is factual and accurate pertaining to the "Flexite Denture" site. The previous article stated that this product is not what it actually is and represents. I know, I have used this product for over 20 years at my business. The products alone have helped thousands of people with severe allergic reactions to traditional methods that relied on monomers as part of their chemical make up. There are no other companies out there today that offers the Dentist and patients a choice of 5 different materials rated 99.9% biocompatible, by The Clifford Institute, in Colorado and the John Hopkins Clinic in Maryland. This "Flexite Denture" site helps people choose, on their own, which particular product is suited best for their own health and well being. With so many copy cats in this aspect of removable Dentistry, it is essential that the general public be supplied with the FACTS, not someone's opinion as a competitor. There is a difference between promoting a product and stating the facts of it. I am sure your site is interested in only in these the facts, I am stating my views as someone who has seen life changing results happen on a daily basis to the general public.

Thank you,


 * Adding "There are no other companies out there today that offers the Dentist and patients a choice of 5 different materials rated 99.9% biocompatible" would be equally as promotional. Articles must be written with a neutral point of view, meaning articles shouldn't promote the subject. Tone may be useful. SwisterTwister   talk  03:23, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

Hello again, for neutrality sake, I hope this is better for you. Instead of the above as stated, this re-wording seems less promotional. "This company manufactures (5) five different thermoplastics. All (5) five have been certified by various testing organizations as being in the 99.9% biocompatible ranking. These testing companies are: The Clifford Institute in Colorado Springs, Colorado and the John Hopkins clinic in Baltimore, Maryland." Thank you,