User talk:Eddy Irish

Welcome
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Eddy Irish, good luck, and have fun. – Cybervoron (talk) 17:56, 15 March 2015 (UTC)

2015 Canadian Grand Prix
Dear Eddy, I am sure you wrote your race report in good faith. It does however not meet the criteria set by Wikipedia for writing such sections. The biggest issue is that your report is lacking a neutral point of view, using words like dominating and impressive. Adjectives like those might be used in the context of "Hamilton, in what xx described as a 'dominating victory'" when you give a source who xx is and where he said it. But that should also be placed in a post-race section covering the reactions. For a guideline on how to write such reports, you can take a look at reports that achieved Good Article or even Featured Article status.

Cheers, Zwerg Nase (talk) 08:40, 8 June 2015 (UTC)