User talk:Editangel

Without Reservations
Hi. Just to let you know I've removed what you added to this article and to explain why. There were a few problems;
 * It reads like a review of the film, not a description of the plot, and there is no indication whose review it is. This gives it the appearance of it being your own personal opinions, which Wikipedia doesn't permit.
 * For reviews Wikipedia needs sources and cites to reviews by professional reviewers.
 * Wikipedia shouldn't address the reader "we".
 * You added an uncredited appearance by Dolores Moran, but do not provide any source for this claim. How is the reader to verify its accuracy?

Please feel free to edit the article again, but please refer to here about citing sources. Let me know if you need help. Thanks. -- Escape Orbit (Talk) 14:51, 23 June 2016 (UTC)