User talk:Edits4change/sandbox

Peer Review by Relaxbear4649
Overall, I think you are off to a great start! There are lots of laws that you are covering in so the format of a list helps the reader go through the article smoothly. Your lead offers a clear and concise explanation of privacy laws in the United States but I think introducing the three types of legislations (Medical, Data, and Financial) will also be helpful in guiding the reader into the next sections. Hyperlinks are used throughout the article, which can be helpful for readers who are interested in learning more about the specific terms mentioned in your article. In the section "Law for Minors", it might be useful to include a couple sentences as to why minors have different laws compared to adults. Keep up the good work!--Relaxbear4649 (talk) 03:25, 22 March 2019 (UTC)