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Charlene's Peer Review

Hey there, You did a great job explaining the controversy of healthcare providers and their role in reporting domestic violence cases. The article explained both sides well while maintaining a neutral tone. One point I was a little confused about was under the "Victim's Perspective" section where you mention "Women who are abused are 1.5 times more likely to support a legal policy to have a routine screening for domestic abuse" but then later on it says, "It is more likely for women who have never been abused to be more in favor of a mandatory report policy than women who have been abused before." These two sentences seem to contradict each other, so one suggestion to improve the article would be to clarify this section so that the statistics are more clear. Other than that, the article is really well-written!