User talk:Edwardk199

Hi Edwardk199, I'm writing here as you are a newbie and you have only edited one page, as a courtesy to you to explain why I've made changes to that page.

I've made some alterations to your edited page - Lucette Aldous.

I have corrected some spelling.

I have confirmed some in-Wikipedia links.

I have removed some unsourced material - we have to be very careful on Wikipedia that articles about living persons are properly sourced - there is as yet no published source for a death date, there were no sources I could find (and I tried!) for quite a lot of the content of the article.

I've cleaned up the grammar.

Also, having both met the lady and seen her dance, she was not 5'4". She was 5'0". So I took out the reference to her height. Also some of the material in the article could be read as personal opinion in tone, which Wiki editing does tend to discourage.

Welcome to Wiki editing and I hope you enjoy it! Sophoife (talk) 16:32, 6 June 2021 (UTC)