User talk:Edwardsnmac/sandbox

Hey, Ashley! Great work so far. I think you have added lots of valuable information. Next, I would try to find a picture you can add to the page. Also, if you want, you can always go through the reference list and make sure all of the links work! Hthrxlynn (talk) 15:57, 12 July 2018 (UTC)

Response to Peer Review
Thank you, Heather! I've just got to make sure that the image I use isn't copyrighted, so hopefully I can add something. Edwardsnmac (talk) 16:09, 12 July 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hey good article, maybe you can also add a lead section, just to give a quick summary.Amechifrank (talk) 18:24, 13 July 2018 (UTC)