User talk:Edwindesa

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (August 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:56, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Industry Breakpoints (August 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Idoghor Melody was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


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 Comr Melody Idoghor  (talk)  08:15, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Business Trajectory Management (August 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Gusfriend was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


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Gusfriend (talk) 09:43, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Outpacing Strategy (August 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Outpacing Strategy and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:52, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Your draft submissions
Hi,

I saw you submitted in a short space of time at least three drafts, Draft:Industry Breakpoints, Draft:Outpacing Strategy and Draft:Business Trajectory Management, which share many similarities. Firstly, they are written like essays, which isn't what Wikipedia is about; we are an encyclopaedia, and the style of writing and the structure of articles is different from essays - see 'What Wikipedia is NOT'.

Secondly, every material statement should be supported by referencing, clearly indicating which source it is supported by; this is among other things needed to ensure there is no original research included. It also helps us ensure that the content hasn't been copied or closely paraphrased from an external source.

Finally, I noticed that your drafts are heavily dependent on the works of Paul Strebel for their referencing. Is there a particular reason for that, eg. do you have any connection with Strebel? If so, you need to disclose it.

Any comments or questions, let me know. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:02, 21 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Dear @DoubleGrazing,
 * How do I disclose my connection to Paul Strebel?
 * Kind regards,
 * Edwin Desa Edwindesa (talk) 14:05, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
 * I will post a message here (below) with instructions on how to disclose. Please note that you need to separately disclose any paid editing, in addition to conflict of interest (COI). -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:26, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Managing a conflict of interest
Hello, Edwindesa. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:


 * avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization, clients, or competitors;
 * propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (you can use the request edit template);
 * disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see Conflict of interest);
 * avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see Spam);
 * do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:26, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Concern regarding User:Edwindesa/sandbox
Hello, Edwindesa. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that User:Edwindesa/sandbox, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 08:01, 21 January 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Industry Breakpoints
Hello, Edwindesa. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Industry Breakpoints, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 09:01, 21 January 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Business Trajectory Management
Hello, Edwindesa. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Business Trajectory Management, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 10:02, 21 January 2023 (UTC)

Paul Strebel moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Paul Strebel, is not suitable as written to remain published. It appears there is a WP:UPE or WP:COI conflict. Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, and have addressed the UPE/COI issue, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. As per WP policy, please do not move into mainspace yourself.  Onel 5969  TT me 11:57, 6 February 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Industry Breakpoints


Hello, Edwindesa. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Industry Breakpoints".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Hey man im josh (talk) 12:40, 21 February 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Business Trajectory Management


Hello, Edwindesa. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Business Trajectory Management".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Hey man im josh (talk) 12:55, 21 February 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Paul Strebel (March 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


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Greenman (talk) 11:07, 26 March 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Outpacing Strategy


Hello, Edwindesa. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Outpacing Strategy".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗ plicit  09:19, 7 April 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Paul Strebel (September 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Timtrent were:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Paul Strebel and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Paul_Strebel Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Timtrent&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Paul_Strebel reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

🇺🇦 Fiddle Timtrent  Faddle Talk to me 🇺🇦 22:03, 21 September 2023 (UTC)