User talk:Edwort/sandbox

Article Evaluation
I have found about 3 articles that I am interested in wether is to add to these or start a new article about something. Edwort (talk) 23:35, 12 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
"all year round, the park" in this sentence put a period instead of a comma. "The Park District launches other events like Taste of Glen Ellyn which is a great way to kick off the summer in town and surrounding areas" change launches to something like hosts. Also remove or reword the last part as it sounds more like an opinion. "everyone in the community, also counts with a fourth of July parade" consider rephrasing "also counts" part not sure what that means. You use the word counts several times when I think you may mean "comes" or something like that. "for your dog to play" remove this part or reword as it doesn't sound like Wikipedia type language. Overall lots of good information, just check grammar and make sure your writing remains neutral and not putting in any unnecessary opinion.