User talk:Eelst175/sandbox

Peer Review - Andrew Lane
Erin,

This is a really good article. Just a couple things: - The 'Red Scare' was more of the fear of communism being hidden within the community rather than the movement itself

- The word "persecution" in the fourth paragraph of 'History' is slightly charged. It implies a bit of a slant.

- In paragraph five of 'History', I think you should change "strikes have become less and less" to "strikes have become less frequent".

- See if you can squeeze some more citations into that 'History' section.

Great work!

Andrew

Peer Review - Terri Harris
Great progress! It is informative, unbiased, and addresses different issues involving your topic.

Just provide more background or more current events involving labor unions. Overall, you're heading in the right direction!

-Terri — Preceding unsigned comment added by Terriharris97 (talk • contribs) 01:58, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

Michael Smith's Peer Review
Erin, Pretty good article on your wikipedia page. Just needs some touching up on the Red Scare. Also in the history portion of Labor Unions the history is a little shaky but not by too much. Overall the article is very well in thought and prose and gives out a lot of detailed information that is very helpful for individuals who are not informed on this subject. Good Job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mike Smooth (talk • contribs) 23:26, 12 April 2018 (UTC)