User talk:Ef674

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Hello, Ef674, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hello, I was assigned your wikipedia article to peer review. I shall try to the best of my abilities to peer review.

First thing is first, I like the amount of sources you have put. It shows how much research you put into this article. Very briefly I would like to mention what I suggest should be fixed. There are some grammatical mistakes in the sentence referring to the Theresienstadt film. Please check that sentence, and maybe other mistakes I have missed regarding grammar. Speaking of Theresienstadt, it links to the concentration camp. Above it refers to the film if it wants to be redirected to that. please re fix that link and automatically put it to the film. Regarding references, reference number 3 does not look like it belongs there. I know it refers to her films, however it does not see to look like a credible source. or if you can, link it to the film festival page itself.

Best of luck to you in finalizing this articleFilmstudiesclass01 (talk) 19:20, 19 March 2016 (UTC)