User talk:Efemjee

Your submission at Articles for creation: Corey Calliet (November 15)
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SwisterTwister  talk  06:46, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Corey Calliet


Hello, Efemjee. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Corey Calliet".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 18:31, 22 May 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Regis Prograis has been accepted
 Regis Prograis, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Hitro  talk  14:18, 21 September 2017 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jay Jones (October 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dan arndt was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Dan arndt (talk) 00:21, 7 October 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jay Jones (rapper) (October 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Robert McClenon (talk) 04:23, 7 October 2018 (UTC)

October 2018 Reply
Apologies for not responding earlier. In respect to your request for advice on Draft:Jay Jones (rapper) the main issue relates to the sources provided. The first reference to Young Money Entertainment is what is considered a primary source as YME is the company promoting Jay Jones and therefore is not considered an independent source. The second reference to the South Florida Times is an acceptable reliable reference. The third reference to Complex Media appears to be a reliable independent source, whilst the fourth reference is just a lyrics site and carries no weight whatsoever.

In respect to content the draft article uses a lot of weasel words, such as "music mogul", "a legend in the New Orleans rap genre" and "studio baby", which are seen as an attempt to puff up the importance of the statement - you need to keep any statements factual and objective.

Finally in the Discography you need to separate Jones' releases (as a solo artist) from those where he just appears on the song by another artist. You need to remove the links from the titles to iTunes, Spotify, Datpiff and YouTube as direct links are actively discouraged and iTunes and YouTube are not considered acceptable, independent reliable sources anyway. I would personally cut the Videography section unless you have supporting references (not YouTube) as to his roles in those videos.

Let me know if you need any further advice - happy editing. Dan arndt (talk) 02:46, 9 October 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Corey Calliet


Hello, Efemjee. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Corey Calliet".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Phospheros (talk) 00:58, 23 April 2019 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Jay Jones (rapper)


Hello, Efemjee. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Jay Jones".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Dolotta (talk) 04:44, 25 April 2019 (UTC)