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I will improve the existing article on Gender separation in Judaism by editing the section titled "Weddings and Bar Mitzvahs". This section only has one sentence and I believe I can add more to why there is gender separation at these events and the cultural reasons behind this. http://www.myjewishlearning.com/article/mehitzah-separate-seating-in-the-synagogue/ http://www.chabad.org/library/article_cdo/aid/506515/jewish/Women-in-the-Synagogue.htm http://www.mishpacha.org/gender.shtml Egarfinkel2 (talk) 01:48, 12 October 2016 (UTC)Elizabeth Garfinkel

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This looks like a good start. The source by Sadaf is not a scholarly article but a newspaper article. --Prof. Bitzan (talk) 22:01, 21 November 2016 (UTC)