User talk:EggSushi

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re: Hello professor, my name is JAEMIN, CHOI.
Well done, good job! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 05:26, 9 September 2020 (UTC)

Pot nature moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Pot nature, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. – Thjarkur (talk) 09:01, 25 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Hello EggSushi, on Wikipedia articles on terms we need some reliable sources that are specifically dicussing the term. Passing mentions might be used to showcase usage, but it's not enough to base an article on. See WP:SYNTH. I removed a section from that article which seemed to be original research which would fit for an essay, but not an encyclopedia. Do you know of any Korean-language sources that directly discuss this phenomenon? (Do not worry about the assignment points being reduced from me moving your article to draftspace, your professor can see the article's history to verify that you did write content). – Thjarkur (talk) 09:06, 25 September 2020 (UTC)

November 2020
Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Nambi-geunseong, from its old location at User:EggSushi/sandbox. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 18:21, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nambi-geunseong (November 2)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sagotreespirit was:

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— Sago tree spirit  (talk) 05:08, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

Hello Jaemin! This is feedback about your article "Nambi Guensung"
Hello! I'm your classmate Jaehyeon Park. I read your article, and tI think the theme of "Nambi Guensung" was really a good choice. In particular, it seemed to give a good example of "Nambi Guensung." However, I felt that the amount of content on the subject was small, and I hope to change the picture to a more realistic one. Jaehyun2633 (talk) 12:14, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Pot nature
Hello, EggSushi. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Pot nature, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 21:05, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Nambi-geunseong
Hello, EggSushi. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Nambi-geunseong, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion under CSD G13. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it. You may request userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 17:02, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

Review
Hello! I read your article ko:공산주의의 역사. I didn't know much about Marxism, but I got to know it properly when I read the article. I think it's a good article because people who didn't know communism like me can understand it at once. It was interesting that the history of communism was also listed.--JeongYoon Oh (talk) 16:04, 4 May 2021 (UTC)

Review(User name: BBam BBam/ Kim Yoon)
Hello, EggSushi! Im BBam BBam. I read your article well. The color of the table in the article that seems to have considered the content is also sensible! While reading your article, it was easy to read because most of all, you seemed to have divided the paragraph into visibility. Thanks to this, I could understand the origin of communism step by step. It was also more interesting to show specific examples with countries that advocate communism that exist in modern times. --BBamBBam (talk) 11:08, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Nambi-geunseong


Hello, EggSushi. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Nambi-geunseong".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 16:42, 29 May 2021 (UTC)