User talk:Eggshells

Request for feedback on User:Eggshells/Elfland
Hi Eggshells. The WP:FEED page is currently protected, so I'll offer feedback on your article here if that's okay. The only issue of contention I can see (aside from a few minor WP:MOS corrections, which can be fixed when it goes to mainspace) is the reference list - you currently don't list any third-party sources, which are our usual requirement. Have a look at WP:RS to see the sort of thing that would be appropriate - your best bet would be to track down some professional reviews (Amazon doesn't cut it, I'm afraid), which would also enable the article to satisfy WP:NOTE. The formatting and wikification is excellent for a first article. If you can find enough reviews, you might also want to include a section on Critical reception, assuming that the book has made enough waves in the fantasy world to have attracted substantial notice. Hope this is helpful, Yunshui (talk) 07:31, 24 August 2011 (UTC)