User talk:Ehester21/sandbox

Evaluating an Article
I agree that the article on Hon Lik could be improved in the way you suggested, provided that there are good sources for the information. If you find good sources, post them in your sandbox. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:00, 4 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Are you working on two articles? I recommend that you pick just one of those. You need to really get moving. I don't see any sources in your sandbox.
 * If you decide to work on Hon Lik, be sure the bio doesn't read like a celebration or promotion of his work. It should stay neutral. Word choice matters here. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:56, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I see that you added some sources, but you also linked back to the article itself as a source, which doesn't make sense. The article cannot cite itself as a source. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:21, 25 April 2019 (UTC)

Final Assessment
Thank you for such a substantial and valuable contribution to the article on Hon Lik. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:42, 6 May 2019 (UTC)