User talk:Eid2298/sandbox

I like the way you have so many examples of movements in media and have them all laid out, but for a suggestion I would have them more organized and have them arranged by sections. BrianjCasciotta (talk) 18:51, 20 October 2016 (UTC)Brian --- you need to pull this together and finish writing about those stories you are going to use as an example. your opening paragraph needs to tell me about fictional movements and you need to cite sources. the first two sentences do not sound like you wrote them so cite your information. this needs major work to get a passing grade. Ctysick (talk) 16:05, 29 November 2016 (UTC)