User talk:Ejmg24/sandbox

Hi Emily Jane, Great start with your evaluation, and I liked that you pointed out aspects of the article that you wish to develop. I would have liked to see you expand your comments and critique a bit more. Still, you show that you have a plan of action for your Draft of the Transnationality entry. You're definitely on the right track! Griffyn1987 (talk) 21:09, 11 February 2019 (UTC)

Draft Evaluation Hi, Emily-Jane. I really liked your draft for the article Transnationality. You have a good sense of how your article should look like. Following are few ideas of mine which I feel like might help you with your article, Transnationality. The important thing to keep in mind is that you need to have a neutral as well as an easy tone in the article, so it is read easily by a general audience. In first paragraph, with the definition of Transnationality, I think it would be a good idea to give a summary or an idea as to what readers can expect in the article following. This helps save time of readers and see if the article has what they need. I also had a chance to look at your group’s sandbox and I found the idea of hyperlinking multinational companies within the article very interesting. This helps the reader all the information in the same place and saves their time. For expanding on the term Transnationality you can also look at how it affects the world or different changes that has been brought with technology and inter-connectedness in world. You can also look at Transnationality on National, International and Global aspect. For example, the relationship between cities and migration, which will also help explaining the topic on a broader level as well as help with the research. Studying this relationship can help us understand Transnationality but also different comparative relationships that can be included in the article. Last thing I would like to suggest to help you with your article is that if you can find photographs that illustrate Transnationality across borders would be interesting. It helps understand the term with diagrams or pictures. You have done a great job so far ad I’m sure you will do an amazing job on your article. Goodluck! Prabh1899 (talk) 19:12, 8 March 2019 (UTC)Prabh1899

Hi Prabh,

Thank you so much for your kind words. In regard to your suggestions I will try my hardest to include then into my article. I think youre point on bringing in how transnationality and how it has affected the world is a great idea. In addition to this, I think bringing in the idea of technology would also be very beneficial. In saying this, the topic has proven hard to find information on, because of this I have had a hard time finding different sources that vary with information. I will take everything you have said into account to try to make the article the best it can be! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ejmg24 (talk • contribs) 11:46, 4 April 2019 (UTC)