User talk:Ejp7358/Maps by Craig Dworkin

This article does not have a clear and memorable title. Should be Maps by Craig Dworkin when you publish this. Lead paragraph is good but could be longer. Wiki formatting is used. However, the references should be placed in their own section. Article is okay grammar-wise.

Article meets NPOV, NOR, and V criteria. References are used but should be in own section. An infotable on the work including page number, publisher, ISBN would be great. Article does use images. Off to a great start! Mazurr15 (talk) 21:55, 6 October 2015 (UTC)

First Thoughts (before reading): I like the use of the picture because it gives the reader a sense about who he/she is reading about. The formatting is very nice. The paragraphs are not too long and each section has an appropriate header which makes it easier to find information about the author.

After reading: The first section gives a good overview of his past works. I think you should start off the article with the author's name because when reading, I was not aware of his name until I looked back at the picture to find the name.

The title should not haveEjp7358 in it since that is your user name I assume. Also, you should try to add a summary from what you wrote to the intro which I would place before the picture just so it is truly seen as the intro. WhiteLightning12 (talk) 21:54, 6 October 2015 (UTC)

I think the article is appropriate considering it's only the 1st draft. Secondly, I think if you put the picture of the on the right top side then that would have been better. If you can, try also to put the books picture, that should be the 1st priority. Lastly, speaking about the author is vital, however, i don't think we should talk a lot about the author since the main focus is on his work. You can link the author to a greater Wikipedia source or outside article.