User talk:El cid, el campeador/Archive 56

COI and Very Long Warning
Hello! Thank you for proposing changes to my first wikipedia page. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/David_A._Hirsch You put in a COI and Very Long warning. To solve these problems what can I do? I was thinking of making another wikipedia page for Hirsch's Media appearances to condense the page so it is shorter. However, I do not know what I can do for the COI warning. I was provided no incentive for this page and created the page because David Hirsch is a respected member of the community with large achievements. Please help me troubleshoot this! Thank you again!--Dadsofamerica (talk) 04:55, 2 August 2017 (UTC)
 * (TPS)Your article was unfortunately deleted as you had copied from a site which does not allow you to do so. You may create the article again but this time remember not to copy from any site,though if you have any relationship with the subject of the artice I would strongly suggest you to read WP:COI.Thanks RADICAL  SODA(FORCE)  10:01, 2 August 2017 (UTC)

Thank You!
I see what you mean. Simple words like "expert" can impose bias without 100% evidence. Additionally, I will work to use my references to paraphrase rather than take text. Much Appreciated!--Dadsofamerica (talk) 16:37, 2 August 2017 (UTC)

Speedy deletion declined: Mandingo (band)
Hello El cid, el campeador. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Mandingo (band), a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Being signed to a notable label indicates importance/significance (WP:CCSI, WP:CCSI). Thank you.  So Why  14:07, 4 August 2017 (UTC)

Semi-glitch on your userpage
Hey,

When viewing your user page in my browser (Firefox 52.2), the image gallery is all the way below the infobox on the right hand side, instead of next to it. Not really a big glitch, but it could look nicer :)

Jchmrt (talk) 19:56, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks! That is the exact kind of advice I was looking for. I will take a look at it when I get the time. ‡ Єl Cid, Єl Caɱ̩peador  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  20:12, 7 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Glad I could help! Jchmrt (talk) 22:37, 7 August 2017 (UTC)

Speedy Deletion
I'm not sure how to request one so I came to you. I found a draft that does not really qualify for an article and I wanted to request that it be deleted. Dinah In Wonderland 14:57, 8 August 2017 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Ned Kelly
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Organi Giudiziari G12
Just an FYI that I changed the source here to be the original text issued from the Holy See. Copyright and the Holy See are complicated: in this case it was clearly protected, but some of the works of earlier Popes are not, and for this reason might be quoted on various websites on the internet. TonyBallioni (talk) 17:18, 14 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Ah, thank you for fixing that, and excuse my ignorance! ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  17:24, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

A Panda For You~!
Thats for your help with the CSD! And it's also slightly for you having on your watchlist as well ^-^ ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 14:35, 15 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Pandas are always appreciated, thank you! And I'm always happy to help with anything I can. Look forward to working with you in the future! ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  14:57, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

Your welcome. I look forward to it as well~! And in light of the circumstances I do not mind being called Din~ ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 15:00, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Deal! And I won't abbreviate Wikipedia as Wiki either. ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  15:38, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

Oh so that's what it means! I thought it was saying don't violate Wikipedia! Oops~ well I only abbreviate when in a hurry at least... ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 15:40, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
 * haha, I was just saying that because on your Userpage it says not to abbreviate! You can do whatever you want :^) ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  15:50, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

Si i remember putting that up awhile ago... geez I can't believe I didn't know what it meant and I'm supposed to be an Author! Well... now I know at least ^-^ oh and on my Userpage it also says not to use the Userboxes without my permission so; if you ever want to use any of the ones I made feel free to do so. ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 15:53, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
 * thank you! I added one to my page : ) ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  16:50, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

Si I saw! Thanks for using it! ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 16:53, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

I'm not one to ask for help on these sort if things but one user seems like they follow my edits and just now reverted me AGAIN when this IP who originally put in the edits was revered by clue bot. When they put them back in I removed them again het this user states I didn't give a detailed edit summary that explained my edits or that I blanked the page. Could you help? It's getting on my nerves and on my TP it's in the section August 2017. I can't say anything to this user because they just remove my discussion on their talk page or don't reply to me on mine. I'm generally a nice person but this happens over and over again. And one time an IP edited a users TP so I removed it this user just put it back in and warned ME. ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 18:14, 15 August 2017 (UTC)
 * I am looking into it right now ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  18:21, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

Okay thanks. If I am wrong I will admit my mistakes and apologize for taking up your time. And I just figured out that this user I was trying help in taking the IP edit off just removed it ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 18:23, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

Thank you. Now I believe me and can get along better now. ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 18:59, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

New Page Reviewer granted
Hello El cid, el campeador. Your account has been added to the " " user group, allowing you to review new pages and mark them as patrolled, tag them for maintenance issues, or in some cases, tag them for deletion. The list of articles awaiting review is located at the New Pages Feed. New page reviewing is a vital function for policing the quality of the encylopedia, if you have not already done so, you must read the new tutorial at New Pages Review, the linked guides and essays, and fully understand the various deletion criteria. If you need more help or wish to discuss the process, please join or start a thread at page reviewer talk. The reviewer right does not change your status or how you can edit articles. If you no longer want this user right, you may ask any administrator to remove it for you at any time. In case of abuse or persistent inaccuracy of reviewing, the right can be revoked at any time by an administrator. Alex ShihTalk 00:33, 16 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Please consider helping get the huge backlog down to a manageable number of pages as soon as possible.
 * Be nice to new users - they are often not aware of doing anything wrong.
 * You will frequently be asked by users to explain why their page is being deleted - be formal and polite in your approach to them too, even if they are not.
 * Don't review a page if you are not sure what to do. Just leave it for another reviewer.
 * Remember that quality is quintessential to good patrolling. Take your time to patrol each article, there is no rush. Use the message feature and offer basic advice.
 * Thank you so much, good sir! I will make you proud ;o) ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  00:35, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

Protocol Labs
This page should not be speedily deleted because it is covered by reliable sources (TechCrunch and Forbes) and is notable. Additionally, I do not see the promotional wording you refer to in the very small stub article. Endercase (talk) 13:38, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

Merger discussion for June 2017 Champs-Élysées car ramming attack
An article that you have been involved in editing&mdash;June 2017 Champs-Élysées car ramming attack&mdash;has been proposed for merging with another article. If you are interested, please participate in the merger discussion. Thank you. TheGracefulSlick (talk) 21:21, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

NPR
You might find this post worthwhile. Didn't want to name names directly, but since you're tangentially included I thought I'd drop you a note. Cheers, Primefac (talk) 00:47, 17 August 2017 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Cold War II
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El articulo, Coleman Heating & Air Conditioning
Hi El Cid,

Thank you for the suggestion to add more refs to the new article: Coleman Heating & Air Conditioning. Per your suggestion, I've now added one more ref which new ref is independent. I've also tried to explain why I believe this article is worthy of a "keep," on the article's talk page.

Salud,

Warrenfrank (talk) 22:01, 17 August 2017 (UTC)

Deletion
During my research, I found the actual page... I changed other pages to reflect the correct link opposed to what several pages had it set as. Thank you! Gvstaylor1 (talk) 19:52, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Great! I'm glad you figured it out. Let me know if you ever need any help understanding WP. Cheers ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  19:53, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
 * How do you warn someone for vandalism?Gvstaylor1 (talk) 23:11, 17 August 2017 (UTC)

look up Template:Warning or Template:Vandalism ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 23:21, 17 August 2017 (UTC)

Hi
Hello, I just saw the article with a Chinese title. Am native speaker of Chinese and I can ganrantee that it is an advertisement (promotion). I added speedy deletion tag on that article. Thank you.損齋 (talk) 03:51, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

Aha Thank you so much. This is my first barnstar in English Wikipedia. Cheers.損齋 (talk)

A cup of coffee for you!

 * hey, thanks! I appreciate being appreciated. Thank you as well for your contributions :) ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  13:23, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

Creative Leadership Page
Hi there, thank you for reviewing the Creative Leadership page and for your feedback. I haven't written a Wikipedia page in awhile so am a little rusty. How can I improve the page to avoid deletion? I did indeed read many articles to put it together (I haven't done any original research of my own). Looking forward to receiving your input! Thanks so much lododo  —Preceding undated comment added 08:49, 18 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Hey! First, for your own benefit, you CAN remove Proposed deletions, even from pages you created. It is true that you CANNOT do so if it is a speedy deletion or a deletion discussion, but you can in this situation. Second, thanks for checking in with me! It shows that you want to make a good article. So while I always (95% of the time) assume good faith, now I can be confident in good faith.

But, let's see. I removed PROD, so don't worry about deletion. It's hard for me to conceptualize how the tone appears unencyclopedic. It's really just as though it is manual on leadership or a presentation at a conference, rather than an article in an encyclopedia. Instead of advocating or supporting the information, just attempt to just state it, objectively. Honestly, I also think it would be an improvement to delete the lists of themes and just summarize them in text.

Example: Instead of Creative leadership is a philosophy and style of leadership that involves leading a group to a novel and innovative outcome. Creative leaders display behaviors that may contradict traditional management styles. [1] Creative leadership rejects the premise of creativity as the act of a lone genius,[2] and is instead based on the premise that innovation emerges from a group of individuals, particularly in conditions that promote creativity. In addition to relying on creative contributions from individuals, creative leaders provide supportive contributions: psychological, material, and/or social supports that trigger, enable, and sustain creative thinking in others.[3]

The tone should be closer to

Creative leadership is a style of leadership based upon the concept of working cooperatively to develop innovative ideas. Those who employ creative leadership tend to do so by creating conditions which promote creativity, often using their own contributions as an example.

Does that make sense? I'm saying you have to do a total rewrite, but just try to fix the tone, if that makes sense. Does it? Thanks :o)  ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  13:42, 18 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your reply! That's helpful feedback, I think I'll be able to make those changes to the tone. I'll go through in the next couple of days and work on the phrasing for a more encyclopedic style. I'll also change the way those themes are presented as well; I had looked at other leadership pages and saw lists like that so thought they would strengthen the article but sounds like they had the opposite effect. If you have some time for it, would it be okay if I send you a note when I've made the changes and you can have another look with your critical eye and let me know if anything else needs improvement? Thanks again for your response- I am slowly but steadily learning what it takes to be good Wikipedia editor! lododo comment added 10:03, 19 August 2017


 * Hi there, I've made some changes to the creative leadership page. Would you be able to have a look and let me know if there's anything else I can improve? Working on the tone of voice was harder than I expected so I hope it turned out okay. Looking forward to receiving your feedback! Thanks again for your help. lododo comment added 5:021, 23 August 2017

Review these pages
Hello User:El_cid,_el_campeador, please review these 2 pages Thanku Bhattacharya57 (talk) 15:34, 18 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Kaldighi Park
 * Baadmor Bazaar

Thanks User:El_cid,_el_campeador, for your review, please review these articles if u can Thank you Bhattacharya57 (talk) 16:59, 18 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Kaldighi
 * Kids Hall
 * Kalitala Children Park
 * Mita Cinema Hall
 * Government Inter College Noida
 * Gangarampur B.Ed College
 * Government Post Graduate College Noida
 * Avviare Educational Hub
 * Gangarampur Bus Stand


 * Hello! My concerns are: the articles are very short; they do not provide reliable references; and they may not be independently notable. My recommendation is to add the content from these articles into the article on the city they are located in. That is likely the best place to put information on these places - and even better, it will be in a central location (the city's article) where people can see everything at once, and learn more about the city, etc. Having separate articles for minor places in the city just makes it less likely readers will find out about the city. ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  17:34, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for your response, we will add more information about these articles so please dont redirect those articles. Please review the articles. Nayanhalder57 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 17:41, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

Kids Hall
Why did yo redirect the article Kids Hall, please undo because this is original article, i will add more details Bhattacharya57 (talk) 18:12, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

Question for you
Someone left a question for you on your userpage. They removed it but you should check your userpage history. ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 20:41, 18 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you! ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  20:55, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

No problem ♠Dinah♠ 🎤 21:22, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

Reverting the CSD removal - Shendi Ashraful Ulum Hafizia Madrasa
My apologies, thought it was the original creator and was doing it too fast. I self-undid my revert. Will be looking into this now, although the creator of this article posted another blatant spam. -★- PlyrStar93. → Message me. 🖉← 05:19, 19 August 2017 (UTC)
 * No need to apologize! I wish schools were eligible for A7 (notability CSD), but unfortunately they're not. I would support XfD if you nominated it, though. ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  05:32, 19 August 2017 (UTC)

Thank You
Thank you for reviewing the article Durban bid for the 2022 Commonwealth Games--Rishabsingh.nitt (talk) 19:25, 19 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for creating a good article! ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  05:45, 20 August 2017 (UTC)

A goat for you! too
Thanks Buddy.

UtubeGodwin (talk) 09:25, 19 August 2017 (UTC) 
 * Haha, thank you so much for the goat! It is always a pleasure to review your articles. ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  05:46, 20 August 2017 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks for checking out Karen Jamieson. Please have another look at it; I think you may find that it should not be deleted speedily. Geordie.birch (talk) 01:39, 21 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking the time do improve the article! It looks far better now. ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  02:01, 21 August 2017 (UTC)

And thank you for keeping me on my toes. This is only the second article I have created; I'm learning *a lot* as I go.Geordie.birch (talk) 02:04, 21 August 2017 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Badme
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Speedy deletion declined: Zak Elbouzedi
Hello El cid, el campeador. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Zak Elbouzedi, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Not a test page, but will be contacting the article creator to discuss its shortcomings. Thank you. Shirt58 (talk) 09:18, 21 August 2017 (UTC)

Speedy deletion declined: Mat Dan
Hello El cid, el campeador. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Mat Dan, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Article claims coverage in reliable sources. Thank you.  So Why  12:16, 21 August 2017 (UTC)

A goat for you!
Didn't even think to speedy Man cult via A11 learn something new everyday.

 Whispe ring  03:13, 21 August 2017 (UTC) 
 * Thank you for the goat!! And yes, I am learning a lot every day :D ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  13:59, 21 August 2017 (UTC)

Ally Law
You missed an important step:. Not four hours old :) My name is not dave (talk/contribs) 19:12, 21 August 2017 (UTC)
 * It still shows up as being 4 hours old in the New Pages feed and the page's history, but I apologize for not being more astute. ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  19:20, 21 August 2017 (UTC)

Re: User talk:Tikishini
I have removed the user's ability to edit the talk page. Thanks for the heads-up. ... disco spinster   talk  16:36, 22 August 2017 (UTC)
 * No problem! Thanks for taking care of it :^) ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  09:50, 23 August 2017 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Ted Kaczynski
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Sources from the article Following (EP)
Sorry, I'm just curious as to why you added a template saying the article has unreliable sources. All the sources I've added are trustworthy, those websites have been around for years and they always gave concrete information about South Korean releases. --Librious (talk) 02:47, 24 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Hello, I was referring to using facebook as a source. ‡ Єl Cid of ᐺalencia  ᐐT₳LKᐬ  12:52, 24 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Oh, even though it's her official Facebook? --Librious (talk) 16:52, 24 August 2017 (UTC)

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