User talk:ElainaDH/sandbox

=Evaluations=

4/24/2019 Evaluation by KStein91

 * Points: 30.5/40
 * Grade: 76%

Spelling/Grammar
Exceeds standard: great job!

Language
Meets standard: Needs a better transition after "Thor" and then discussing "Latin"

Organization
Meets standard: Lacking some transitions to make it easier to read. Also lacking a header for context to were this will be placed in the article.

Coding
Standard?: There doesn't appear to be any clickable links to find your citations.

Validity
Meets standard: Looks to be solid information, however the lack of links and context for the History Paris page itself.

Completion
Meets standard: Looks complete, but again would like more context.

Relevance
Meets standard: Looks good but still would like more context.

Citation
Does not meet standard: same reason as listed under sources.

Spelling/Grammar
Perfect

Language
Almost Meets Standard.

This phrase needs to be fixed: "Frankish laws and customs (known as salic, meaning 'salt' or 'sea', law) and customs became the basis of French law and customs"

To me the phrase "just sixteen years old" doesn't sound as neutral/academic as "at sixteen yours old"

Organization
Meets standard.

Coding
Meets standard.

Validity
Meets standard.

Completion
Meets standard.

Relevance
Meets standard.

4/23/2019 Evaluation by Npearso2

 * Points: 38/40


 * Grade: 95%

Spelling/Grammar
Perfect!

Language
Almost Meets Standard. In the beginning, the flow feels awkward, but overall it sounds like it should be on the page!

Organization
Meets standard.

Coding
Perfect

Validity
Meets standard.

Completion
Meets standard.

Relevance
Meets standard.

5/3/2019 Evaluation by DrMichaelWright
DrMichaelWright (talk) 23:30, 3 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Points: 35.5/40
 * Grade: 88.75%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard

Language
Meets standard Suggested amendment: "He did not reject the pagan gods and their myths and rituals" to "He did not reject the pagan gods, nor their myths and rituals"

Organization
Meet standard.

Coding
Meet standard.

Validity
Nearly meets standard. The statement "Latin was no longer the language of everyday speech" is questionable, especially since it is not supported by a citation. My understanding is that Vulgar Latin continued to be spoken, but took on words from the Frankish language, but less so than in more northern regions, such as those that became Belgium and the Netherlands. That is what eventually would become Old French. However, if you can convince me that I am wrong about that, then I am happy to give you the point back.

Completion
Nearly meets standard. The actual added text is fairly minimal.

Relevance
Meets standard.

5/15/2019 Evaluation by Npearso2

 * Points: 29/40
 * Grade: 72.5%

Spelling/Grammar
Nearly meets standard: There are a few spelling and grammar errors in the first paragraph in particular.

Language
Does not meet standard: The tone of this text is very informal and reads more like an anthropological or sociological evaluation rather than an encyclopedic entry.

Organization
Does not meet standard: There does not seem to be much structure to this section. Perhaps organizing the text in chronological order may help.

Coding
Meets standard: There does not appear to be any coding issues.

Validity
Meets standard: The information provided seems to be accurate.

Completion
Nearly meets standard: There is a major historical component missing, I feel. If Marseille is tolerant of multiculturalism, when and how did this start?

Relevance
Nearly meets standard: The sentence about the beach in the first paragraph does not seem relevant.

Citation
Does not meet standard: Many of your sentences make statements without proper citations.
 * "Marseille continues to be multicultural." How? Citation? The following sentences also need in-text citations.
 * "The market at Noailles, also called Marché des Capucins, is in old town, near the Old Port." How do you know this?