User talk:Elder Oakenheart

Your submission at Articles for creation: Telescopic Text (music) (September 28)
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voorts (talk/contributions) 00:03, 28 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello Voorts. Forgive me for any obvious errors, this is my first wiki entry and am finding it difficult to navigate the provrdd correctly. I'm unable to discern from the feedback what is directly from you, and what is automated by the wiki site itself so apologies if it has been answered and I simply am confused.
 * Can you provide more detail about what about the article is missing or incorrect so I can make the proper correction or addition?
 * Initially I discovered that I cannot link the direct articles from the Oxford New Grove Online as it requires password access that the general public is unable to access, hence why I listed the simply home site. This is the same for the JSTOR article.
 * I had read a comment (I believe from another editor) inquiring about if a technical term warrants a wiki article. I would point to the fact that this is a specific compositional technique, of which other techniques have their own article ( Fugue) and that Telescoping text is the primary method for creating Missa brevis. Within other wiki articles they include reference to this technique, however, it seems their mentions lack the specificity in what the technique entails. Elder Oakenheart (talk) 01:36, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
 * As you've noted, you didn't actually link to the articles you're citing. It doesn't matter if there's a paywall, you still need to link to the source itself. Additionally, just from looking at the titles of the sources you've cited, I can see that they are not specifically about telescopic text. An article can only be published to Wikipedia if you prove that the subject is notable by citation to independent, secondary sources. That is, you need to cite several sources that discuss the article topic in depth. voorts (talk/contributions) 01:52, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 01:06, 28 February 2024 (UTC)