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Inaccuracies in the Da Vinci Code
Hi. Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edit to Inaccuracies in the Da Vinci Code, as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edit had to be reverted, because Wikipedia cannot accept unsourced material or original research. This includes material lacking cited sources, obtained through personal knowledge or unpublished synthesis of previously published material, or which constitutes the personal point of view of the editor adding the material. Wikipedia requires that all material added to articles be accompanied by reliable, verifiable (usually secondary) sources explicitly cited in the text in the form of an inline citation, which you can learn to make here.

Also, please understand that Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and should be written with care taken in adhering to basic principles of writing, such as spelling, punctuation and sentence structure. Specifically:
 * Proper nouns like The Da Vinci Code, Catholic and Jesus are capitalized, not lowercased.
 * The words Catholic, disagreed and scandalous are not spelled "cathlic", "dissagreed" and "scandolous".
 * Sentences end in punctuation marks, usually a period, and are separated by a space. They do not end in commas, and the next sentence is does not begin immediately after the punctuation. There is also no reason to place a colon in between the words "the" and "fascinating" in the phrase "the fascinating tale".

If you presume to edit an encyclopedia, then you should be able to use SpellCheck and the Preview function to make sure that your material is properly composed. If you cannot do this, then you may want to consider whether you're qualified to edit an encyclopedia. Nightscream (talk) 19:23, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

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Hi thank you for your advice, I appreciate your comments and will take into account your tips when I next edit a piece of text

Elena659

Elena659 (talk) 19:37, 6 March 2012 (UTC) 