User talk:Elephants394/sandbox

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Nice start. Don't forget to include inline citations (so readers can find your sources) and wikilinks (that allow readers to find out more about topics and terms they might not be familiar with). Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:20, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

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Like the person above noted you need in line citations you do this by using the tag after a sentence that you make a factual statement. It should automatically be saved to your references section if you have the reflist tag at the end of your sandbox already set up. Also you might want to consider having a section for filmography. — Preceding unsigned comment added by James.Travaglini (talk • contribs) 02:58, 1 December 2014 (UTC)

In text links and changes
Hi I add a few in text links to your page to link the info to other wikipedia pages. I was also going through and thought it would be a good idea to change a sentence that's a little awkward in your page. Its the first sentence of the second paragraph "Ana lives in Miami, Florida where the TV show was filmed and has always been very involved with theatre as well and performed in many plays"

I was thinking of changing it to this: (Ana lives in Miami, Florida where the TV show was filmed and has been involved with theatre productions.) I think this just sounds a bit more informational and more like an encyclopedia entry.

Also I think if you add one additional section to break up your wikipedia page that will add a bit more depth to the presentation.

Clawson93 (talk) 15:37, 1 December 2014 (UTC)