User talk:Elesaturner/sandbox

Hi, this article is neatly organised and split into clear sections with headings and subheadings making it visually easy to read. There is also a clear grasp of the topic that is being covered and the details are relevant to the issues at hand.

However, the last two paragraphs are significantly smaller than the previous two. In order to improve your article you could either expand on the points made in the 'Moving Forward' and 'Where Things Stand' sections or combine both of these sections to create an overarching conclusion for your article. Also, although this is only a minor detail you could add an image / images that relate to the rent strikes you have spoken about in order to elevate your article even further and make it more visually attractive.

--TS1602 (talk) 13:38, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

I agree with that feedback and have decided to combine the two sections. I am unable to upload photos without getting a copyright error so I will not be doing that.