User talk:Elias19080

Ways to improve Martin Burckhardt
Hi, I'm Mduvekot. Elias19080, thanks for creating Martin Burckhardt!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. I found sentences like "In 2014 he published the science fiction novel Score which depicts a society which solely relies on a gamified economy, a year later a meditation on the Boolean formula." almost impossible to parse. Are you saying that he published Score in 2015, a year after Alles und Nichts, which Sha Xin Wei called a "meditation on the epochal shift effected by Boole’s logic" when it was published in English by The MIT Press in 2017?

Another problem is the lack of references. Unfortunately, the Einzelnachweise from de:Martin Burckhardt (Autor) are all but useless. You need to look for substantial coverage in independent, reliable sources. It's easier to do that at the start of the process o writing an article, rather than looking for material that supports the claims that you've made. I would suggest that you limit the bibliography to books that have been reviewed, and remove all unsourced claims. The find sources and add back only those that you have a reference for.

Good luck, and do let me know if you need help.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

Mduvekot (talk) 22:16, 21 September 2017 (UTC)