User talk:Elicordova/sandbox

Exercise 12
This week, more progress has been made in terms of research to fill in some of the gaps of the article. Slowly, this research is being transformed into paragraphs to be added to wikipedia. This week, Home was added to current problems, and more additions to potential new programs. Changes to section titles, organization, and grammar are constantly being updated as necessary. No comments have been made to the page so far. Knwightm (talk) 22:15, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

Bailey's Peer Review
This is such an important topic and I think so far your edits are much needed. Adding sections and changing subject headings is a good idea to better encompass the deficits within the sex education system regarding the LGBTQ+ community. It maintains a neutral tone and you guys have a lot of good citations. A section for possible solutions and research on how to better to make sex education inclusive and relevant to all students. Overall, I think you guys are really filling in the gaps that this article was previously missing. Great work! I think a section on solutions is definitely going to be important to this topic. I've already started research into the benefits of LGBTQ sexual education programs not on just LGBTQ youth but how it also benefits heterosexual youth as well. I could definitely make a section just for research on this topic as well. Knwightm (talk) 00:54, 12 November 2018 (UTC)