User talk:Elijahyamauchi

Help Request
Please help me with... In the article [Hōjō Takatoki] the last sentence " His oldest son, Hojo Kunitoki was killed in Siege of Kamakura and his second son Hojo Tokiyuki was the last son of Hojo Clan also Takatoki's brother Hojo Yasuei who help Hojo Tokiyuki from suicide." I feel like it should be " His oldest son, Hojo Kunitoki was killed in Siege of Kamakura and his second son Hojo Tokiyuki was the last son of Hojo Clan. Takatoki's brother Hojo Yasuei helped Hojo Tokiyuki after his father's suicide." Elijahyamauchi (talk) 07:57, 25 January 2021 (UTC)


 * ✅ — Yours, Berrely  • Talk∕Contribs 08:26, 25 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Here's what I was going to say:
 * I agree that the last sentence is garbled. Without being able to look at the Sansom book, I have no way to determine if the alteration you've proposed corresponds with what the source says. There would be no objection to removing the garbled sentence. If someone with access to the source later wishes to additionally clarify what happened with the second son, they can add it, but it's not strictly needed in an article about the father.  — jmcgnh (talk) (contribs) 08:29, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
 * @Jmcgnh I believed it was non-controversial, I'm quite sure that's what it was trying to say. If you think it needs someone to read through the source to confirm it, feel free to do so. — Yours, Berrely  • Talk∕Contribs 08:32, 25 January 2021 (UTC)