User talk:Elisweets/sandbox

Colorless Green Dani Review: This page is a great start to the very tiny existing page. Firstly, I like how you all added titles and sub headers. This will help users go to exactly what they are looking for. Also, I see you have added many new sources. The original page only had one so this is a great improvement already. I also like how a chart was added. I will definitely a try to add a chart to my page as I found this to be very helpful. This made it easy to compare the languages. This article seems to remain fairly neutral too! I think the biggest things is just added and filling up the article from the sources you have listed, which I’m sure you all will get to since this is just a draft. Also, don’t forget to make a contents box at the top that links to all the headers like 1. Uses, 2. loanwords/calques, etc. You could even add in pictures of real life signs or things that use frespanol. (Colorless Green Dani (talk) 00:41, 5 March 2020 (UTC))

Peer Review
This article draft has a potentially fluid outline. Each author has assigned topics with links to specific websites from which information for the article will presumably come. This is a good start! The chart displaying how French and Spanish words interact is an interesting example to see. In completion of the article, this chart should be accompanied by an explanation because some of the Fragnol words don't seem like they incorporate both aspects of both languages (this is not a fault of the authors, just a bit of confusing linguistic patterns encoded in the "language"). This gives me some insight as to types of media I could insert into my article to better explain my points. Overall, great start! Alyeska20 (talk) 02:57, 5 March 2020 (UTC)

I think some introductory information about the sociolinguistic aspects of Fragnol can be very useful, especially because code-switching is a big thing when it comes to sociolinguistics. Including identity as a section is a great idea because it is possible there have been articles about the identity aspect of using Fragnol. Finally, I think including phonetic presentation of the words in the table would be very helpful for those who have no idea how to pronounce them. If audio files can be added to Wikipedia pages, pronunciation of the words in audio files or even a link to them could be a better idea. Samira Hamzehei (talk) 20:12, 16 March 2020 (UTC)

I like that this draft's sources are broken up by the group members. Presumably that means each group member will be especially familiar with their sources and that will be helpful when integrated into a final Wikipage. I really liked the chart that you included in your draft, visual additions like that are always helpful in understanding unexplored topics such as this. One suggestion, I saw a brief sentence about the history of Frespañol and that one group member had posted two possible sources, but I'd love to see who used Frespañol and why it even came about touched on heavily in your final page as I never ever knew this existed. Great work otherwise! Naija824 (talk) 21:57, 20 March 2020 (UTC)

This is an excellent start to expanding this page. I like how much you have already put in as well as making sure you cite the sources that you plan to use but might not have used yet. I really like the chart that you've including showing the all of the different words. I also am really interested in the cultural impact and boundary and cultural impacts, I think the mixture of languages (and just cultural concepts in general) across boundaries is fascinating so that should be a really interesting part. Good work! Ebootjones42 (talk) 06:58, 2 April 2020 (UTC)