User talk:ElizabethFritz/sandbox

ElizabethFritz's Peer Review
Overall, your additions to the article are solid. I liked that you added more recent statistics to show that this organization is still improving and spreading worldwide to help make a positive difference. I would include maybe an opposition to this organization. I am sure there are sources out there that do not support the IPPF at all and would do anything to shut it down so I would do more research on that. I suggest you add more information about the history of this organization. I know there was a little background about it at the beginning of the article, but it would be interesting to know how and why they decided to start this organization since it has made a positive impact on reproductive health for many years. I was wondering if they only get major fundings from Canada and the United States or other countries contribute as well? This is a great start, but I would research more on the pros and cons of this organization. The word choice is very proper and sounds like something I would read from an encyclopedia. Brenda le11 (talk) 02:55, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for putting my improvements into consideration. The new additions to your article look great! I love all of the facts and the history of IPPF in there. It helps give me a better understanding about this organization. I saw that you added a fact from the Cairo Conference that we learned in lecture today. That conference was huge in developing the family planning policies we have today so I am glad you added that. Great work! Brenda le11 (talk) 19:23, 9 April 2018 (UTC)