User talk:ElizabethPublicSchools

Re Elizabeth Public Schools
I agree that the material added in the Controversy section would benefit from some balance, but the material there is attributed properly to reliable and verifiable sources, and I have trimmed some of the details that had been added there and reworded others. The material that you added has been cut-and-pasted from this link in its entirety. In addition to the lack of attribution (the source is reliable and verifiable), the material is written from an overly promotional perspective and needs to be reworded into your own words and written in neutral fashion (per WP:NPOV). I removed almost all of what you had added and will be willing to extract useful material from the "At a Glance" page and from the list of achievements, but the material does not meet Wikipedia policy in its current state. Please do not remove sourced material from the article and please make sure that what is added is encyclopedic, written in neutral fashion and is in your own words. Please feel free to contact me on my talk page with any questions. Alansohn (talk) 03:37, 9 September 2011 (UTC)