User talk:Elizabeththies

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Nicole's Peer Review
Heyyy,

Awesome article friend. Just a few things:

- Great opening paragraph: Would maybe add just a little bit of information to show how the Facebook Data Scandal relates to information ethics (just to make it clear). - Medical Records: Check grammar, maybe explain a little bit as to why access to patient files is an ethical concern (any examples/ extra information from the article you already have maybe?) - International Security: check grammar; again, I'd also give a brief statement as to why the Patriot Act applies to information ethics (doesn't have to be long).

Looks awesome! Can't wait to see it up on the page :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nicolewright24 (talk • contribs) 16:39, 19 April 2018 (UTC)