User talk:Ellass22

Welcome!
Hello, Ellass22, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Welcome!
Greetings and welcome (again!) to both Wikipedia and to COM482! I think Everybody's Fine (2016 film) is a good choice and it seems you've already added a plot summary which seemed like a simple and pretty straight forward additions. Why don't you take a look at the WikiProject Film/Chinese cinema task force for some examples of a really good articles on Chinese films which will give you a sense of what good next steps would be. Good luck! — m a k o ๛  15:14, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi Ella, I just left my peer review on the talk page of your article as well as made a few edits directly onto your article as well. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Ellass22/Everybody%27s_Fine_(2016_film) Leonaaklipi (talk) 06:04, 23 October 2020 (UTC)

Feedback on your draft
Greetings ! I've taken a look at User:Ellass22/Everybody's Fine (2016 film). The new plot summary you've added looks fine (I assume so, I haven't seen the movie) and the other tidbits you've added and references throughout looks good. My main feedback is to keep editing the text you've added to try to improve the English.

Other than that (and that's not a showstopper, in my opinion), I don't see any problems. Why don't you start the process of moving things over. Thanks for all your hard work on this! — m a k o ๛  18:09, 4 November 2020 (UTC)