User talk:Elle&Vire

I think your article is very informative. You present a lot of interesting facts about the topic “Shelf Ready Packaging”. I liked it very much that you have implemented some pictures as examples. Hence it is much easier to understand the descriptions in the text.

Furthermore I think the style of your written text is very well, especially for a non native speaker. It is easy to understand and makes fun to read it.

As a final suggestion, maybe you could add a practical example of a company, which is a kind of role model in using shelf ready packaging. Maybe you could use Kraft with its brand Milka for that. I hope my feedback was helpful for you.

Best regards Rheinj