User talk:Ellie Irving

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Hello, Ellie Irving, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Elysia and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review: School refusal
Your revision of the article's lead section makes it sound concise and informative, great job! The outline you created provides greater organization and distribution of information in the article. I feel that you are looking to expand the article in important directions. Your outline seems to break up sections that were vastly longer than others and improves the flow of information. For example, by providing a classification section, you are helping readers to understand the nuances of the behavior. My only suggestion would be that you consider the order of the subsections carefully to ensure the most logical progression of ideas. Otherwise, you appear to be well on your way. I am excited to see how the article turns out.

Lucy Hollister (talk) 22:10, 8 February 2019 (UTC)