User talk:Ellieduley/sandbox

A lot of great information is in this entry. There is nice broad paraphrasing to talk about your topic but with so many sources and news sources I think that you should be careful of bias, which I don't see much of, and I believe you could have more information instead of just two small paragraphs, but information is clean and structured. (JMott2 (talk) 14:07, 19 November 2019 (UTC))

Jamisonahrens (talk) 19:39, 19 November 2019 (UTC)I think this is a very good add on to the original wikipedia page and has a lot of important and relevant information. But with that being said, I think you could add a lot more information on Jose. You could try and find what his life was like before he was found guilty, maybe find who he killed and his motives, even though its morbid maybe find the ways he killed, if he had a family, etc. You don't have to write a full essay on him of course but I think you could find some more relevant information that you could make into two larger paragraphs rather than two small paragraphs.