User talk:Elliott, Elizabeth/New Sandbox

1. First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that describes the subject in a clear way? The article did a good job on adding more examples of anonymous birth in other countries. Some in which go into a good amount of detail that helps the reader understand why the countries decided to practice this.I was impressed with the amount of sources found to be applicable and the usage of these.The background information on the topic as well as giving information on related topics is helpful for the reader to get more insight on the purpose of anonymous birth. 2. What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement? -Expanding on the countries that are being added could be helpful… However, I make note that they are not completed. Looking at the sources in the articles chosen for these countries might be helpful in expanding each country. This could improve the sections in making them feel a little more complete/full. -Reading the paragraphs/sections out loud is helpful in finding flaws with flow. There are some sentences that feel choppy or not complete. This would be helpful in creating more flow within the sections and article overall. 3. What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article? The most important thing the author could do to improve the article is expanding on the countries if possible. Giving complete ideas and formulated information in each example… However, I imagine that this is something that you are working on!! Looks good so far!

4. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Something I found applicable to my article is the structure of the article. The order of the sections and information is a strong part of this draft! There is a flow of the structure of the article that is very easy to follow--something I need to work on within my own article. Jasminelyne (talk) 04:18, 11 December 2018 (UTC)