User talk:Elodieme/sandbox

Kristen's peer review -could maybe expand on the transmission section and include a short description of the life cycle -wouldn't hurt to include another case as an example -overall good draft with facts and no bias

Hello! I have some additional comments:

- You have an incomplete sentence in paragraph 1 under symptoms in animals: "Further pregnancies." - Also in that paragraph: legions should be lesions - Is there a scientific name for the stable fly? Does a page for it exist on wikipedia (if so make sure you link them) - In the "In humans" section I would add 'products' after dairy in the first sentence. - I agree with the reviewer above who suggested adding another case study if you have one (that would add support to the statement that there are multiple reports in humans).

Overall I think you are off to a great start! Agleichsner (talk) 15:46, 9 April 2018 (UTC)