User talk:ElsaMeserlian

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jessica Grimson (April 15)
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Legacypac (talk) 04:11, 15 April 2018 (UTC)

Need to discuss feedback
Hello :)

I submitted an article on the English athletes Victoria Palmer and Jessica Grimson prior to the Commonwealth games and they were rejected based on not having rigorous referencing.

I have referenced the International Volleyball Federation news articles about their achievements, as well as the National Volleyball federation (Volleyball England).

Could someone please have a more elaborate conversation about what's missing? I do understand you've linked me to guiding pages, but I'm not sure that will be helpful as I am still under the impression that the evidence I've provided should be sufficient!

Thanks in advance,

Elsa :)