User talk:ElsieEmma

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Doug Lofstrom
Hi ElsieEmma. Thanks for creating the article Doug Lofstrom. Unfortunately,, the article as it stands currently is promotional in tone and could have been "speedy-deleted" as unambiguous advertising. Now, this may not have been your intention of course but the first few paragraphs in particular need to be fundamentally rewritten to comply with our policy on neutrality. Instead of asking for deletion, I have moved the article to draft space where you can continue working on the article and get comments and tips from reviewers. The draft is at Draft:Doug Lofstrom. Cheers, Pichpich (talk) 20:40, 30 June 2019 (UTC)

Doug Lofstrom moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Doug Lofstrom, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Please work on formatting the article clearer and work on citing your information and doing it properly. ~  Araratic  &#124; talk  14:34, 1 July 2019 (UTC)
 * I want to insist on the fact that the above is not the only major problem with the article. As I pointed out in my last message on your talk page, the tone of the article is not consistent with Wikipedia's policy on neutrality and the article should remain in draft space until this issue is addressed. Best, Pichpich (talk) 19:27, 1 July 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Doug Lofstrom (October 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by CaptainEek were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Doug Lofstrom and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Doug Lofstrom, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 07:00, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

Draft:Doug Lofstrom concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Doug Lofstrom, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:27, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Doug Lofstrom


Hello, ElsieEmma. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Doug Lofstrom".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! UnitedStatesian (talk) 18:28, 25 July 2020 (UTC)